The Dark Engineer

sorry but I find it Confusing. hope it improves.

(I have read up to chapter 12, which is currently the newest chapter.)Honestly I cant find anything to critique here, gramar is very good, with rare mistakes which are usualy very minor, characters are pretty good, with an interesting dinamic between the various OG protagonists.Overall, this is definitely in my raidar now, I suggest you give this novel a try!

" Why not it would be the quickest way to become the strongest and be able do whatever it is that I always wanted to do" - Caleb

After hearing this question, Feng Chen's mother, Fei Hong, brightened. This meant that the legendary Al family was interested in their son! Fei Hong could barely hide her excitement and a little of her thrill leaked into her voice.

Moving up to her face, her lips were succulent with the bottom one pouting a bit, her straight pert nose and her big black eyes staring at him with ferocity. Her skin was smooth and light brown in color. Her dark past shoulder length hair was falling over her face. The effect of this combination was beautiful. She was carrying a weird bag on her shoulder and two bigger bags on both hands tightly.

She shrieked, her eyes fixed on the empress's unmoving form. The princess had a vague understanding of death – her tutor said that all living things died when their time had come. But mama… it wasn't mama's time yet! It couldn't be!

All the worker who already arrived here in Bali were all committed to follow Alex in this new project. But this is the first time they learned some of the details of his plan.. the massive recruitment, the choice of location, the supplies prepared.. this made them really worried.

"Hmmm, I don't have, but if God permits, in my next life, I would like to see the same faces again and be your friend once more.." Mu Zen smiled as she replied to Xu Yi and everyone felt warmth in their hearts, indeed they have not regretted even a single moment following Their Zen.